She has such a lovely expression and the details in the make up are beautiful. The way the lighting works in the ribbon, the curtain and even in the shine of her lipstick bring all the different red elements together and keep my eyes going around the image. It's beautiful.
it's really not too bad, the detailing and the sharpness is lovely. butttt (here it comes again..) i feel like there is just too much of the red curtain-ish thing on the left. i don't think cropping that out would make it any better though. i think the main problem is that this isn't working too well as a landscape. feels like it would've had much better composition if it were square or landscape. (and not centered) my general feeling is that if you leave so much top hair in the picture, 95% of the time you need to balance it out by including a considerable amount of upper body, chest, etc too. or at least make it portrait and cut off all the excess so it will be just face. it feels like this photo has *so* much potential and isn't fulfilling it. but that's just me